I’ve used the comments (all two of them – don’t you all overwhelm me, now! >_<) on the first issuance of “Welcome to Xeresgate” to shape one of the story choice paths (and, inadvertently, the other two as well). This has turned the first heading into four of them, which are now completed.
They will converge on a fifth heading, after which there will likely be a chance for more input from you guys. As I am nearing the passie-outie time of the day, it’s probably a good time to stop writing for now. Don’t worry, though… as soon as the fifth heading is completed, I’ll update the Word file under the “Graphic Gamebooks” page and release another blog update to let you all know it’s there.
Thanks to those of you who have not just read, but helped (with comments) thus far… believe it or not, your feedback motivates me to keep writing! So thank you for that. 🙂
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hey guess what… your sleepiness is making me tired. stop that!
I cannot be held responsible for residual sleep inducement… on the next day!
That’s your fault for reading it too late.